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As informed earlier, we had taken only the metal structure for the repainting while the crystal parts were being kept on site. When we check the carton box which was being used for keeping the glass parts and crystal pieces, we found that there are some crystal parts were found to be damaged. This was due to careless handling. It seems that these carton boxes were shifted from one place to another repeatedly.

  

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As (we) informed earlier, we had taken only the metal structure for (the) repainting, while the crystal parts were being kept on site. When we (check ed ) the (carton) box, which was being used for keeping the glass parts and crystal pieces, we found that (there are) some crystal parts were found to be damaged. This was due to careless handling.

  • As (we) informed earlier, we had taken only the metal structure for (the) repainting, while the crystal parts were being kept on site.
  • When we (check ed ) the (carton) box, which was being used for keeping the glass parts and crystal pieces, we found that (there are) some crystal parts were found to be damaged.
  • This was due to careless handling.
  • It seems that these (carton) boxes were shifted from one place to another repeatedly.
  • (we) has been inserted to distinguish from (we were) informed.
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As (we) informed earlier, we had taken only the metal structure for (the) repainting, while the crystal parts were being kept on site.

When we (checked) the (carton) box, which was being used for keeping the glass parts and crystal pieces, we found that (there are) some crystal parts were found to be damaged. This was due to careless handling. It seems that these (carton) boxe

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