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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Are these sentences grammatically sound?

The cane furniture supplied were found to be damaged due to moisture by ingress of water in the packages. These packages were found wet due to inappropriate storage and handling.
  

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Here are some changes: The cane furniture supplied was found to be damaged due to moisture by the ingress of water into the packages. These packages were found to be wet due to inappropriate storage and handling. You can also say it this way: The cane furniture we ordered was damaged by water seepage into their containers.

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  • Here are some changes: The cane furniture supplied was found to be damaged due to moisture by the ingress of water into the packages.
  • These packages were found to be wet due to inappropriate storage and handling.
  • You can also say it this way: The cane furniture we ordered was damaged by water seepage into their containers.
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Here are some changes:

The cane furniture supplied was found to be damaged due to moisture by the ingress of water into the packages. These packages were found to be wet due to inappropriate storage and handling.

You can also say it this way:

The cane furniture we ordered was damaged by water seepage into their containers. This was caused by i
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