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Dice Posted 5 years ago
Grammar

Are these sentences grammatically correct?

Please find below a link which you can use to join an online meeting, which is going to be held on the 28th of May at 9:00 am by the director-general Mr White.

  

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Mr White,the Director-General, has scheduled an online meeting, for the 28 th of May at 9:00 am. Please attend by using the following link. You can .

— Clive

  • Mr White,the Director-General, has scheduled an online meeting, for the 28 th of May at 9:00 am.
  • Please attend by using the following link.
  • You can .
  • .
  • is a weak word here.
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Mr White,the Director-General, has scheduled an online meeting, for the 28th of May at 9:00 am.

Please attend by using the following link.


You can . . . is a weak word here. t suggests that I have the ability to attend but that t I have some choice.

My version above is clearer and more direct.


Clive

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