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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
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Upon inspection, one of the metal screens supplied was not found to have full decorative hole design. It seems that they forgot to complete the punching work on the left side of the screen.

Upon inspection, one of the metal screens supplied was not found to have full decorative hole design. It seems that they forgot to complete the decorative hole design on the left side of the screen.

  

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My suggestion: Upon inspection, o ne of the metal screens supplied was found not to have the full decorative hole design. It seems that they neglected to complete the design on the left side of the screen. CJ

  • My suggestion: Upon inspection, o ne of the metal screens supplied was found not to have the full decorative hole design.
  • It seems that they neglected to complete the design on the left side of the screen.
  • CJ
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My suggestion:

Upon inspection, one of the metal screens supplied was found not to have the full decorative hole design. It seems that they neglected to complete the design on the left side of the screen.

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