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Dice Posted 5 years ago
Grammar

Are these sentences grammatically correct?

If I could change something about school, it would be that we don’t have to wear the school uniform, so that we can wear the clothes we like. I’d like to change the school uniform because it does not keep me warm in winter.

  

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If I could change something about my school, it would be that we don’t have to wear school uniform. I would much prefer to wear my own clothing as our school uniform does not keep me warm in winter.

  • If I could change something about my school, it would be that we don’t have to wear school uniform.
  • I would much prefer to wear my own clothing as our school uniform does not keep me warm in winter.
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If I could change something about my school, it would be that we don’t have to wear school uniform. I would much prefer to wear my own clothing as our school uniform does not keep me warm in winter.

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Dice

If I could change something about school, it would be that we don’t have to wear the school uniform, so that we can wear the clothes we like. I’d like to change the school uniform because it does not keep me warm in winter.

The grammar is OK, but the thoughts are not expressed as clearly as they could be. You want to change the rules so you don'

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