Are these sentences grammatically correct?
As requested, we have already transferred the $600 to your account details provided as advance payment against the request for the reservation for 2 deluxe rooms for the period of 28 October through 31 October 2018 at your hotel.
Please acknowledge the receipt of the payment and look forward to receiving a letter confirming our reservation.
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This is better. As requested, we have transferred $600 to your account, using the banking details you provided. This is an advance payment for our reservation for 2 deluxe rooms for the period of 28 October through 31 October 2018 at your hotel.
- This is better.
- As requested, we have transferred $600 to your account, using the banking details you provided.
- This is an advance payment for our reservation for 2 deluxe rooms for the period of 28 October through 31 October 2018 at your hotel.
- We look forward to receiving a letter acknowledge receipt of the payment and confirming our reservation.
- Clive
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This is better.
As requested, we have transferred $600 to your account, using the banking details you provided. This is an advance payment for our reservation for 2 deluxe rooms for the period of 28 October through 31 October 2018 at your hotel.
We look forward to receiving a letter acknowledge receipt of the payment and confirming our reservation.
Clive
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