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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Are these sentences grammatically correct?

We can't make a delivery report in the system, based on the actual delivery to the site if the quantity reserved is not the same as the quantity delivered.

If we need to upload a delivery report for the items reserved, the quantity of items in the delivery report should be the same as the quantity reserved in the system.

  

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I see the general idea, but the two sentences do not quite say the same thing. I would word it more like this: In order to correctly enter a delivery report into our system, the number of items actually delivered must exactly match the number of items previously reserved. Or, if you want to shorten it up: The items delivered must match the items reserved or we cannot complete a delivery report.

  • I see the general idea, but the two sentences do not quite say the same thing.
  • I would word it more like this: In order to correctly enter a delivery report into our system, the number of items actually delivered must exactly match the number of items previously reserved.
  • Or, if you want to shorten it up: The items delivered must match the items reserved or we cannot complete a delivery report.
  • Does this help?
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I see the general idea, but the two sentences do not quite say the same thing. I would word it more like this:

In order to correctly enter a delivery report into our system, the number of items actually delivered must exactly match the number of items previously reserved.

Or, if you want to shorten it up:

The items delivered must match the items reserved or we cann

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