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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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My name is Carol, I am friend of Sylvia who is staying at Room#15 in your hostel.

As part of my job issues, I need to stay in this city for sometimes. Therefore, I request you to allot me guest room / single room for one month which would be from January 10 to February 09, 2018.

I would be grateful if you could consider my request and allot the room as requested.

  

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Here are some edits and suggestions to make your English more natural. Please ask about any you don't understand. My name is Carol Smith , I am a friend of Sylvia Green, who is staying in Room#15 in your hostel.

  • Here are some edits and suggestions to make your English more natural.
  • Please ask about any you don't understand.
  • My name is Carol Smith , I am a friend of Sylvia Green, who is staying in Room#15 in your hostel.
  • As part of my job issues , I need to stay in this city for some time.
  • Therefore, I would like to reserve a single room for one month, from next January 10 to February 09, inclusive.
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Here are some edits and suggestions to make your English more natural. Please ask about any you don't understand.

My name is Carol Smith, I am a friend of Sylvia Green, who is staying in Room#15 in your hostel.

As part of my job issues, I need to stay in this city for some time. Therefore, I would like

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