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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Are these sentences grammatically correct?

Please note that this was the one was reserved and delivered to the site. The item delivered matches specification provided. The item delivered has bottom supply which matches our specification, so both are same and there is no difference between item delivered and the specification provided.
  

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Some comments:
- Your text is repetitive.
- Change "one" to "item."
- I suspect "selected", "ordered" or "purchased" might be a better choice than "reserved."
- Put "that" or "which" before the second "was."
- I don't know what you mean by "bottom supply."
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Thank you for your help.

I corrected the sentences based on your suggestions. Could you please verify the following sentences

We delivered the item same as the item selected from the catalogue, which matches our specification provided.
The item delivered has water supply connection at the bottom same as in the specification, so both are same and there is no difference between
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We delivered the item same item as that the item selected from the catalogue, which matches our provided specification. provided.
The item delivered has a water-supply connection at the bottom that is the same as in the specification; so both are same and there is no difference between them.
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