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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Are these sentences grammatically correct?
I tried to you contact you couple of times but you didn't pick up my calls.
I called you because the management want to know where the old AV system was kept when it was replaced with the new one in the music room, arrived directly from Germany on 15/12/2015. After replacement, we have given this old one to your staff who was available at that time. Kindly locate this item and inform us accordingly.
I called you because the management want to know where the old AV system was kept when it was replaced with the new one in the music room, arrived directly from Germany on 15/12/2015. After replacement, we have given this old one to your staff who was available at that time. Kindly locate this item and inform us accordingly.
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Your text is mostly ambiguous. Please rewrite it in a clearer way. Use more sentences if necessary.
- Your text is mostly ambiguous.
- Please rewrite it in a clearer way.
- Use more sentences if necessary.
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Your text is mostly ambiguous. Please rewrite it in a clearer way. Use more sentences if necessary.
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AnonymousI tried to you contact you couple of times but you didn't pick up my calls.I tried to call you a couple of times but you didn't answer.
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