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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Are these sentences grammatically correct?

Nobody was inteferred from our squad while he is beating on our player. Firstly, he elbowed our player so badly then our player reacted him but he couldn't do anything on him but he got beaten up.That's is the reason our steve acted so differently
  

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) while he was beating on our player. Firstly, he elbowed our player so badly , and then our player tried to retaliate but couldn't do beat him back. On the contrary he got beaten up more.

  • ) while he was beating on our player.
  • Firstly, he elbowed our player so badly , and then our player tried to retaliate but couldn't do beat him back.
  • On the contrary he got beaten up more.
  • That's was the reason Steve acted so differently.
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Nobody was inteferred from our squad (This is not clear.) while he was beating on our player. Firstly, he elbowed our player so badly,and then our player tried to retaliate but couldn't do beat him back. On the contrary he got beaten up more. That's was the reason Steve acted so differently.
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Thank you for helping me to correct my sentences. Shall I write the first sentence as follows.

No one come from our squad to interfere or resolve while he was beating our player.
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OK. Then,you can consider this.

No one from our squad came forward to help our player while he was being beaten.

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