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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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We would like to order for further quantity of 50 units of pool controllers to replenish our stock. Also, 2 units were found to be damaged in last shipment due to ingress of water; it was caused by its rubber gasket was stretched therefore we checked some other units supplied to the site and have found its rubber gasket has stretched and it might not fit it when we open back cover for changing the batteries next time so that water may seepage into it.
  

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We would like to order an additional quantity of 50 units of pool controllers to replenish our stock. Also, 2 units were found to be water damaged in the last shipment due to a stretched rubber gasket. Because of this, we checked some other units supplied to the site and found their rubber gaskets were also stretched, and they might not fit properly when we open the back covers to change the batteries next time.

— Englishmaven

  • We would like to order an additional quantity of 50 units of pool controllers to replenish our stock.
  • Also, 2 units were found to be water damaged in the last shipment due to a stretched rubber gasket.
  • Because of this, we checked some other units supplied to the site and found their rubber gaskets were also stretched, and they might not fit properly when we open the back covers to change the batteries next time.
  • Water may seep into them.
  • I don't know if you meant that to be plural or singular because you mixed them.
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We would like to order an additional quantity of 50 units of pool controllers to replenish our stock. Also, 2 units were found to be water damaged in the last shipment due to a stretched rubber gasket. Because of this, we checked some other units supplied to the site and found their rubber gaskets were also stretched, and they might not fit properly when we open the back covers to change the batte
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