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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Are these sentences grammatically correct?

We will clear our materials and empty the premises on Tuesday, November 10, 2015 and hand over the key following next day, ie. Wednesday, November 11, 2015
Please inform your security personnel and arrange your inspection team accordingly so that we can carry out the hand over process smoothly.
  

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Anonymous We will clear our materials and empty the premises on Tuesday, November 10, 2015 and hand over the key following next day, ie. Wednesday, November 11, 2015 The words 'following' and 'next' have the same meaning, so one of them should be dropped/omitted. The expression 'clear our materials' is intended to mean 'clear out' or 'remove'.

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  • Anonymous We will clear our materials and empty the premises on Tuesday, November 10, 2015 and hand over the key following next day, ie.
  • Wednesday, November 11, 2015 The words 'following' and 'next' have the same meaning, so one of them should be dropped/omitted.
  • The expression 'clear our materials' is intended to mean 'clear out' or 'remove'.
  • Anonymous Please inform your security personnel and arrange your inspection team accordingly so that we can carry out the hand over process smoothly.
  • 'hand over' should be hyphenated.
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AnonymousWe will clear our materials and empty the premises on Tuesday, November 10, 2015 and hand over the key following next day, ie. Wednesday, November 11, 2015
The words 'following' and 'next' have the same meaning, so one of them should be dropped/omitted. The expression 'clear our materials' is intended to mean 'clear out' or 'remove'.
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