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Maserati Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

are these sentences grammatical? please :)

1b00are these sentences grammatical? and if there are any ungrammatical parts. could you mend and rewrite for me? please 05002b02br
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00After she knew her subordinate affiliated with IBM Company, she made many eulogies and promised to back away from IC field.02br
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00 After receiving Pinto Company’s tricky eulogy, she affiliated with that firm and work for its archive.02br
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00 The judge’s final verdict is that our archive in my office should affiliate with public library.010id1
  

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"02br 02br 001) "Once" is the correct word here, rather than "after". 02br 02br 004) "To make a eulogy" is unnatural English. You do not "make" a eulogy; you "give" a eulogy, or you simply "eulogise".

— Demetrius

  • "02br 02br 001) "Once" is the correct word here, rather than "after".
  • 02br 02br 004) "To make a eulogy" is unnatural English.
  • You do not "make" a eulogy; you "give" a eulogy, or you simply "eulogise".
  • However, it sounds odd to me either way.
  • That is why I have rephrased the clause as "she was very complimentary".
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0 Can you elaborate some more on the part that you said the two names, the Pinto Company and the IBM Company, are definite entities and thus require definite articles? Maybe offer me more names to illustrate (literally) your points. 00What is the difference bet/ proper names and the names of definite entities00?00 01font00 01font
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01cite10Anonymous12cite10Can you elaborate some more on the part that you said the two names, the Pinto Company and the IBM Company, are definite entities and thus require definite articles? Maybe offer me more names to illustrate (literally) your points. 10What is the difference bet/ proper names and the names of definite entities
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