Are these sentences grammatical and natural enough?

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Are these sentences grammatical and natural enough?
? I offer two tuitions (I teach two students). One is at 10 am and the other is at 6 pm. These two tuitions consume 4 hours of a particular day and the rest of the day I browse internet, watch memes, read books, take a shower, nap and have forty winks. Besides, I spend some quality time with my friends both at weekends and other days. So as you can see I literally have no time to have a conversation with you guys. I'm extremely sorry for saying this but I can assure you if time permits I'll definitely join this group conversation. Take care!

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Hasibrahmantuitions

This is odd. Lessons would be more natural instead.

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HasibrahmanAre these sentences grammatical and natural enough? No!

Hasibrahman I offer two tuitions (I teach two students). One is at 10 am and the other is at 6 pm. These two tuitions consume 4 hours of a particular day and the rest of the day I browse internet, watch memes, read books, take a shower, nap and have forty winks. Besides, I spend some quality time with my friends both at weekends and other days. So as you can see I literally have no time to have a conversation with you guys. I'm extremely sorry for saying this but I can assure you if time permits I'll definitely join this group conversation. Take care! ..you may also 'highlight' a part of the text and press 'Quote'

Hasibrahman

Is this a composition about yourself? In American English, this expression of "tuition" sounds strange to me, especially in the context that was used. In the context of your two students, it is much more effective and clear to say " I tutor two students, one in the morning at 10 am and the other at 6 pm. I spend four hours with each student. In between and after the sessions, I usually spend my time on reading books, browsing the internet and taking short naps. You can say " 40 winks " in conversation but it is not very common in writing. Quality time - is not so appropriate in the context of hanging out with friends. You can say " I enjoy spending my weekends with my close friends. The rest is irrelevant and not necessary in my opinion.

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