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Park sang joon Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Are these sentences grammatical?
I have found the following sentences here this forum.
https://www.EnglishForward.com/English/IsSmallParagraphNatural/bhzqnz/post.htm
Being in love with people , that's what comes first in my way of working. But I always look to take photos, whether graphic, colorful or extravagant, that will makes my photo-report that even more fun to read/look at. A blend of traditional and modern customs that makes the wedding ceremony not only a unique moment but also pleasant moment to look at for the whole family and all the generations to come.
https://www.EnglishForward.com/English/IsSmallParagraphNatural/bhzqnz/post.htm
I don't think the above sentences are grammatical, so I corrected errors, like the following; are my corrections right?
Being in love with people , that's what comes first in my way of working. But I always look to take photos whether graphic, colorful or extravagant that will makes my photo-report that more fun to read/look at. A blend of traditional and modern customs that makes the wedding ceremony not only a unique moment but also pleasant to look at for the whole family and all the generations to come.
Being in love with people , that's what comes first in my way of working. But I always look to take photos, whether graphic, colorful or extravagant, that will makes my photo-report that even more fun to read/look at. A blend of traditional and modern customs that makes the wedding ceremony not only a unique moment but also pleasant moment to look at for the whole family and all the generations to come.
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I would make these added small changes: Being in love with people, that's what comes first in my way of working. But I always look to take photos , whether graphic, colorful or extravagant , that will make s my photo-report that even more fun to read/look at. A blend of traditional and modern customs that makes the wedding ceremony not only a unique moment but also a pleasant moment to look at for the whole family and all the generations to come.
- I would make these added small changes: Being in love with people, that's what comes first in my way of working.
- But I always look to take photos , whether graphic, colorful or extravagant , that will make s my photo-report that even more fun to read/look at.
- A blend of traditional and modern customs that makes the wedding ceremony not only a unique moment but also a pleasant moment to look at for the whole family and all the generations to come.
- Note: I removed the space between people and the comma.
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I would make these added small changes:
Being in love with people, that's what comes first in my way of working. But I always look to take photos, whether graphic, colorful or extravagant, that will makes my photo-report tha
Being in love with people, that's what comes first in my way of working. But I always look to take photos, whether graphic, colorful or extravagant, that will make
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