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Maserati Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Are these sentences grammatical? :)

0Are these sentences grammatical? And if not, could you rewrite for me or explain what’s wrong inside? Please : )02br
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00After the inauguration, I saw the new elected mayor lying inside his new office in proneness with a dagger pierced through his throat, many people guess that it might be done by his new hired porter.02br
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00On my way home I saw 4 porters moved the coronation coach, showing sharp malice from their eyes.02br
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00I got into the habit of treating racist with tremendous malice when I once saw a racist stepped over a prone black infant.0-
  

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02br 02br 01font 00After the inauguration, I saw the new elected mayor lying inside his new office, prone with a dagger through his throat. 02font 00 '01i 00Malice'02i 00 is not the best word. It depends on what you mean.

  • 02br 02br 01font 00After the inauguration, I saw the new elected mayor lying inside his new office, prone with a dagger through his throat.
  • 02font 00 '01i 00Malice'02i 00 is not the best word.
  • It depends on what you mean.
  • 01i 00Disgust?
  • 02i 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-
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0Hi Maserati,02br
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00Welcome to the Forum.02br
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01font00After the inauguration, I saw the new elected mayor lying inside his new office, prone with a dagger through his throat. Many people think that it might have been done by his newly hired porter.02font02br
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01cite10Clive12cite10Hi Maserati,12br
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10Welcome to the Forum.12br
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11font10I saw the new elected mayor 12font12br
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10Clive,02br
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00Is it "new elected mayor" or "newly elected m
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0hi, its new elected mayor, yes02br
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00thenk you : )0-
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0Hi guys,02br
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01font00I saw the new01font00ly02font00 elected mayor 02font00You could say it either way. It depends on whether you mean he is new and he is elected, or whether you mean his election was recent. But, I think Krish is probably right, that 'newly elected' sounds more likely
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0 Thanks for the explanation, Clive. 0-

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