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Maserati Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Are these sentences grammatical?

0are these sentences grammatical? And if not, could you rewrite for me or explain what’s wrong inside? please ^__^02br
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00 00After receiving verdict from the judge, the crime backed away from the court, and announced a eulogy to all the people here.02br
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00 00Because of the verdict of the judge, his sentence was commuted from life imprisonment to 5-year jail.02br
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00 00Though our son didn’t kill his aunt in will when he commuted between his home and school, the judge made a verdict that he might suffer from a life of imprisonment.0-
  

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02font 02br 02br 00Before you start to look at grammar, you have a large amount of incorrect vocabulary here, and some places where I don't understand your meaning. 02br 02br 01font 00After receiving 01font 00the02font 00 verdict from the 01font 00jury02font 00, the 01font 00criminal02font 00 backed away 01i 01font 00this seems wrong. what do you mean?

— Clive

  • 02font 02br 02br 00Before you start to look at grammar, you have a large amount of incorrect vocabulary here, and some places where I don't understand your meaning.
  • 02br 02br 01font 00After receiving 01font 00the02font 00 verdict from the 01font 00jury02font 00, the 01font 00criminal02font 00 backed away 01i 01font 00this seems wrong.
  • what do you mean?
  • 02font 01font 00 01i 00This seems like an odd place to kill his aunt - while he was commuting?
  • Did he kill her on the bus?
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0Hi,02br
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01font00After receiving verdict from the judge, the crime backed away from the court, and announced a eulogy to all the people here.02font02br
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01font00 Because of the verdict of the judge, his sentence was commuted from life imprisonment to 5-year jail.02font02
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