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Fold banana 649 Posted 9 years ago
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Are these sentences describing proportions grammatically correct?
"15% of household energy usage is for othe appliances, compared to 7% for refrigerator."
"Heating accounts for the largest proportion in the bar chart, with 32%, followed by other appliances, with 28%."
Thank you guys 
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'Usage' is a poor choice there. 15% of household energy use is for all other appliances, compared to 7% for the refrigerator. In the bar chart, heating accounts for the largest propo rtion at 32%, followed by other appliance s at 2 8%.
- 'Usage' is a poor choice there.
- 15% of household energy use is for all other appliances, compared to 7% for the refrigerator.
- In the bar chart, heating accounts for the largest propo rtion at 32%, followed by other appliance s at 2 8%.
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'Usage' is a poor choice there.
15% of household energy use is for all other appliances, compared to 7% for the refrigerator.
In the bar chart, heating accounts for the largest proportion at 32%
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