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Attempting to escape, Dor'crae was assailed by the nine water elementals that were summoned to entrap the primordial and exploded into thin air, seemingly destroyed. The primordial was once again sealed in its magical prison, and Sylora’s plans for the Dread Ring were ruined. Dhalia moved the last earring to her left ear, symbolizing Dor'crae’s death, and planned to journey to Neverwinter Wood to confront Sylora, who had avoided the battle but was the principal advisor to the plan.