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FYI- Bruenor and Obould are the kings. A battered Bruenor and dying Regis were brought before Obould, and as the two kings starred each other down, Nukkels healed Regis at Obould’s command. Obould then lowered his weapon and agreed to establish peace with Mithral Hall and the other nations of the Silver Marches. Due to Tos'un’s brave actions during the battle, Hralien decided to allow him to live alongside the elves in the Moonwood.