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Sergen also had Umbryl secretly kill the orc emissaries and bring their heads to Bloodskull Keep to ignite a war between Thar and Hulburg, a threat that Sergen envisioned would be the perfect opportunity to launch his plan to kill the true Hulmasters. After Geran’s actions against House Veruna, Sergen and Darsi agreed that it was time neutralize the threat that he had become, but instead of moving directly against him, they decided to provoke him into starting a fight with Veruna and the Merchant Council by harassing Mirya, who was the one person he would do anything to protect.