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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Are these sentences correctly worded?

The band traveled to the village of Longsaddle, the home of the eccentric but talented family of wizards known as the Harpells, whom they hoped would be able to help them find a way to end Pwent’s cursed existence as a vampire. The Harpells told Catti-brie and her companions that there was no cure for vampirism, but they did provide the friends with a spell and a magical ring that might be able to trap Pwent’s soul in an enchanted gemstone. If the magic was successful, the group could then take Pwent’s imprisoned soul to a powerful high priest who could send the dwarf to the afterlife freed of the curse.
  

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cboutin3 afterlife , freed of the curse. The dwarf is freed of the curse, not the afterlife.

  • cboutin3 afterlife , freed of the curse.
  • The dwarf is freed of the curse, not the afterlife.
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cboutin3afterlife, freed of the curse.
The dwarf is freed of the curse, not the afterlife.
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Thanks for your help. I changed the last sentence slightly, how is this revision? If the magic was successful, the group could then take the imprisoned Pwent to a powerful high priest who could send the dwarf to the afterlife while freeing him of the curse.

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