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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Drizzt, Dahlia, and Entreri decided to secretly enter Neverwinter through the sewers. As the companions made their way through the sewers, they were continually attacked a large group of snakes, and Drizzt’s ranger knowledge caused him to realize that something was wrong with the high number of snakes, and he eventually reached the conclusion that they were babies. The trio followed them to their "mother", which was really an aboleth scout that had been left behind by the Sovereignty.
  

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cboutin3 Drizzt, Dahlia, and Entreri decided to secretly enter Neverwinter through the sewers. As the companions made their way through the sewers, they were continually attacked a large group of snakes . Drizzt’s ranger knowledge caused him to realize that something was wrong with the high number of snakes, and he eventually reached the conclusion that they were babies.

  • cboutin3 Drizzt, Dahlia, and Entreri decided to secretly enter Neverwinter through the sewers.
  • As the companions made their way through the sewers, they were continually attacked a large group of snakes .
  • Drizzt’s ranger knowledge caused him to realize that something was wrong with the high number of snakes, and he eventually reached the conclusion that they were babies.
  • The trio followed them to their "mother", which was really an aboleth scout that had been left behind by the Sovereignty.
  • Much smoother, I think.
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cboutin3 Drizzt, Dahlia, and Entreri decided to secretly enter Neverwinter through the sewers. As the companions made their way through the sewers, they were continually attacked a large group of snakes. Drizzt’s ranger knowledge caused him to realize that something was wrong with the high number of snakes, and he eventually rea

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