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Sonnemarie Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Are these sentences correct? Thanks for your help!

All of you who managed being here already demonstrated that you have talent. And those of you who even secure themselves a podium position really have what it takes to become a champion in future.

Do I need commas? Are these sentences grammatically correct? Thank you for your help!
  

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Hello, sonnemarie - and welcome to English Forums. Your sentence needs a bit of repair: All of you who managed to get here have already demonstrated that you have talent , and those of you who secure yourselves even a podium position really have what it takes to become future champions.

  • Hello, sonnemarie - and welcome to English Forums.
  • Your sentence needs a bit of repair: All of you who managed to get here have already demonstrated that you have talent , and those of you who secure yourselves even a podium position really have what it takes to become future champions.
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Hello, sonnemarie - and welcome to English Forums.

Your sentence needs a bit of repair:

All of you who managed to get here have already demonstrated that you have talent, and those of you who secure yourselves even a podium position really have what it takes to become future champions.
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Great! Thank you very much for your help!

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