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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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The client mentioned that we have to arrange for the delivery only for outdoor furniture, and keep all other items until they tell us

In addition, the client mentioned about onyx decorative pieces then we said that we had these items in our stores but when we checked the system today we came to know that these items had already been delivered to the client representative in May, so please convey this message to the client representative.

  

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Here are some edits. The client mentioned that we have to arrange for the delivery of only the outdoor furniture. We will keep all the other items until they tell us In addition, the client mentioned the onyx decorative pieces.

  • Here are some edits.
  • The client mentioned that we have to arrange for the delivery of only the outdoor furniture.
  • We will keep all the other items until they tell us In addition, the client mentioned the onyx decorative pieces.
  • We said that we had these items in our stores but when we checked the system today we found out that these items had already been delivered to the client representative in May, so please convey this message to the client representative.
  • in our stores Do you mean ' in our warehouse '?
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Here are some edits.

The client mentioned that we have to arrange for the delivery of only the outdoor furniture. We will keep all the other items until they tell us

In addition, the client mentioned the onyx decorative pieces. We said that we had these items in our stores but when we checked the system today we found out that these items had already bee

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