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Achu3186 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Are these sentences correct?

Dear Madam,

This is to inform you that my colleague Mr. Soban has owed $1500 from me 2 month ago. Now I understand that he is going to resign from our company.
So kindly request you to get that money from his settlement amount.
  

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Dear Madam, This is to inform you that my colleague, Mr. Soban, has owed me $1500 for two months. Now I understand that he is going to resign from our company, so I would be grateful if you would deduct that money from his settlement amount.

— Clive

  • Dear Madam, This is to inform you that my colleague, Mr.
  • Soban, has owed me $1500 for two months.
  • Now I understand that he is going to resign from our company, so I would be grateful if you would deduct that money from his settlement amount.
  • I have corrected your English, but where I live a company would not involve itself in such a matter.
  • They would say that this is a private matter between you and and your colleague.
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Dear Madam,

This is to inform you that my colleague, Mr. Soban, has owed me $1500 for two months. Now I understand that he is going to resign from our company, so I would be grateful if you would deduct that money from his settlement amount.


I have corrected your English, but where I live a company would not involve itself in such a matter. They
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Thanks for your correction

actually he agreed me to collect this amount from his final settlement. His manager told me
to send a email when I inform this matter.
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Actually, he agreed that I could collect this amount from his final settlement. His manager told me
to send an email when I informed him of this matter.

Good.
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