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Achu3186 Posted 11 years ago
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We have noticed some huge variances in the system Unit rate when we comparing with budget unit rate.
Therefore could you please check and advise the reason for the rate variances.
  

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Better: We have noticed large differences between the system unit rate and the budget unit rate. Please advise us of the reason for the differences. Variance is a statistical term that measures the spread of values in one data set, here the system unit rate.

  • Better: We have noticed large differences between the system unit rate and the budget unit rate.
  • Please advise us of the reason for the differences.
  • Variance is a statistical term that measures the spread of values in one data set, here the system unit rate.
  • But you're apparently concerned that two data sets, the system unit rate and the budget unit rate, don't match.
  • Using the plural "differences" implies that the discrepancy has been going on for some time.
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Better: We have noticed large differences between the system unit rate and the budget unit rate. Please advise us of the reason for the differences.

Variance is a statistical term that measures the spread of values in one data set, here the system unit rate. But you're apparently concerned that two data sets, the system unit rate and the budget unit rate, don't match.

Using the

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