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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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As requested by the consultant, we mock-up a chandelier for the living room in our warehouse premises. After their review, we dismantled the chandelier but unfortunately the crystal arm was damaged by one of our technicians while he was trying to dismantling the chandelier, so please ask the supplier to replace the damaged part immediately.
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Anonymous As requested by the consultant, we mock ed -up a chandelier for the living room in our warehouse premises. After their review, we dismantled the chandelier, but unfortunately the crystal arm was damaged by one of our technicians in the process. while he was trying to dismantle the chandelier.
- Anonymous As requested by the consultant, we mock ed -up a chandelier for the living room in our warehouse premises.
- After their review, we dismantled the chandelier, but unfortunately the crystal arm was damaged by one of our technicians in the process.
- while he was trying to dismantle the chandelier.
- P lease ask the supplier to replace the damaged part immediately.
- The second sentence is probably better split into two; describe the problem, then request the remedy.
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AnonymousAs requested by the consultant, we mocked-up a chandelier for the living room in our warehouse premises. After their review, we dismantled the chandelier, but unfortunately the crystal arm was damaged by one of our technicians in the process.while he was trying to dismantle
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