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NikaDorianskaya Posted 11 years ago
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Are these sentences correct?
Hi! Are these sentences correct? I just need someone to help me confirm that all is good.
1. "Most of them felt that in the gym should be the new fitness equipment."
2. "We should also consider opening the cafe inside the club."
1. "Most of them felt that in the gym should be the new fitness equipment."
2. "We should also consider opening the cafe inside the club."
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1. This doesn't read naturally. It is not certain what you want to say.
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- This doesn't read naturally.
- It is not certain what you want to say.
- For example: Most of them felt that the gym needed new fitness equipment.
- — The existing equipment was old and worn out, say.
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1. This doesn't read naturally. It is not certain what you want to say. For example:
Most of them felt that the gym needed new fitness equipment.— The existing equipment was old and worn out, say.
Most of them felt that the new fitness equipment should be in the gym.— They felt that the new equipment (already existing / known about) should be in the gym rather than
Most of them felt that the gym needed new fitness equipment.— The existing equipment was old and worn out, say.
Most of them felt that the new fitness equipment should be in the gym.— They felt that the new equipment (already existing / known about) should be in the gym rather than
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NikaDorianskayaThank you!But what if I`ve already mentioned "cafe"?2. We should also consider opening the cafe inside the club.
This one can also be used when the possibility of opening a cafe has already been mentioned, or it has already been decided to open a cafe, but there is a question about where the cafe should be situated.
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