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GrammarianasaurusRex Posted 12 years ago
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Are these sentences correct?

Are these sentences correct?

  • He walked toward the door, and when he approached, it opened, and someone walked in and greeted him.
  • When he walked toward the door, someone walked in and greeted him.
  • Someone walked in and greeted him when he walked toward the door.
  

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Yes, but they are awkward, especially the first.

— Mister Micawber

  • Yes, but they are awkward, especially the first.
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Yes, but they are awkward, especially the first.
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