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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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I would like to inform you that Mr. XXY, who was suffering from kidney disease had a successful kidney transplant with his donor on [date]. He is in the ICU till futher treatment of three months.
At this situation, once again, I would like to thank you for your generosity in the fundrasing for his medical treatment.
  

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I would like to inform you that Mr. XXY, who was suffering from kidney disease , had a successful kidney transplant from his donor on [date]. He will remain in the ICU for further treatment for three months.

— Mister Micawber

  • I would like to inform you that Mr.
  • XXY, who was suffering from kidney disease , had a successful kidney transplant from his donor on [date].
  • He will remain in the ICU for further treatment for three months.
  • O nce again, I would like to thank you for your generosity in the fundraising for his medical treatment.
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I would like to inform you that Mr. XXY, who was suffering from kidney disease, had a successful kidney transplant from his donor on [date]. He will remain in the ICU for further treatment for three months.

Once again, I would like to thank you for your generosity in the fundraising for his medical treatment.
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