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Tory303 Posted 14 years ago
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Are these sentences correct?

I made some sentences. Please check whether these are correct or not.

The Kaya Union received bribe from corrupt politicians while they dominate in the country.
The Kaya Union received bribe from corrupt politicians while dominating in the country.
The Kaya Union received bribe from corrupt politicians while their people suffered from enemies.
The Kaya Union received bribe from corrupt politicians while suffering from enemies.
Although he is talented in music, he don't like it.
Although talented in music, he don't like it.
  

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Please do not make so many sample sentences until you have checked single examples with us first. You are simply multiplying your errors. Here is some of what you must fix in all of your sentences: The Kaya Union received a bribe from corrupt politicians who were in power.

  • Please do not make so many sample sentences until you have checked single examples with us first.
  • You are simply multiplying your errors.
  • Here is some of what you must fix in all of your sentences: The Kaya Union received a bribe from corrupt politicians who were in power.
  • Although he has musical talent , he doesn't like it.
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Please do not make so many sample sentences until you have checked single examples with us first. You are simply multiplying your errors. Here is some of what you must fix in all of your sentences:

The Kaya Union received a bribe from corrupt politicians who were in power.
Although he has musical talent, he doesn't like it.

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