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Miyabi Posted 16 years ago
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Are these sentences correct?

Are these sentences correct?

1. "I just want them to know that we are in their lives always."

- what I want to express here is, we are always by this side to support, care and love them always. So, "we are in their lives always" is the right phrasing in expressing this meaning?

2. "I hope this can give him more good and deep memories in his childhood about his own family. I think this is precious. And hope that this can strengthen his sense of family tie."

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1. " - what I want to express here is, we are always by this side to support, care and love them always. - Yours sounds too intrusive.

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  • " - what I want to express here is, we are always by this side to support, care and love them always.
  • - Yours sounds too intrusive.
  • 'I just want them to know that we are always here for them.
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1. "I just want them to know that we are in their lives always."
- what I want to express here is, we are always by this side to support, care and love them always. So, "we are in their lives always" is the right phrasing in expressing this meaning?- Yours sounds too intrusive. 'I just want them to know that we are always here for them.'

2. "I hope this can give him
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