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SHD Posted 16 years ago
Please note that we have not yet received any instruction regarding the above subject from your department or even from those concerned.
This is our regular procedure to inspect each item against with our purchase orders and also, it is the part of one of our policy and procedure for this department.
However, we inspected all items arrived at the warehouse and carefully re-packed and stored accordingly. Also, note that our store is fully air-conditioned and there is no chance to get them moisture by humidity.
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Please note that we have not yet received any instruction regarding the above subject from your department or even from those concerned.
This is our regular procedure to inspect each item against with our purchase orders and also, it is the part of one of our policy and procedure for this department.
However, we inspected all items arrived at the warehouse and carefully re-packed and stored accordingly. Also, note that our store is fully air-conditioned and there is no chance to get them moisture by humidity.
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The boldface are my additions and the crossouts are my deletions of your wording. Here is how I would write your letter: Please note that we have not yet received any instruction regarding the above subject from your department or anyone else even from those concerned regarding (the recent shipment? ) This It is our regular policy an d procedure to inspect each item against with our purchase orders and also, it is the part of one of our policy and procedure for this department.
- The boldface are my additions and the crossouts are my deletions of your wording.
- Here is how I would write your letter: Please note that we have not yet received any instruction regarding the above subject from your department or anyone else even from those concerned regarding (the recent shipment?
- ) This It is our regular policy an d procedure to inspect each item against with our purchase orders and also, it is the part of one of our policy and procedure for this department.
- However, we inspected a A ll items that arrive d at the warehouse are inspected, then and carefully re-packed and stored accordingly.
- Also, Please note that our store is fully air-conditioned and there is no chance to get them moisture damage by the humidity.
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The boldface are my additions and the crossouts are my deletions of your wording. Here is how I would write your letter:
Please note that we have not yet received any instruction regarding the above subject from your department or anyone else even from those concerned regarding (the recent shipment? the damaged goods?)
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Please note that we have not yet received any instruction
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Please add minor fix to last sentence, so that it reads:
...there is no chance for them to get moisture damaged by the humity.
...there is no chance for them to get moisture damaged by the humity.
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