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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Are these sentences all properly worded?

Soon thereafter, Stedd, the three Chosen of Silvanus, many other druids of the Emerald Enclave, and a variety of nature spirits and forest creatures gathered together near the House of Silvanus and performed two powerful magical rituals to save Turmish. The first rite made the Great Rain’s healing effects work faster and repair the damage inflicted by the Spellplague. The magic restored the natural order in Turmish and raised the Emerald Enclave’s magic to its potency before the catastrophic event.
  

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Thanks, I revised one of the sentences, is it still all set? The first rite made the Great Rain’s healing effects work faster and repair the damage that had been inflicted on Turmish by the Spellplague.

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