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. Besides the landed hordes under his command, Tol still controlled the Juramona Militia, which had grown to over two thousand strong. After the victory at Juramona, Tol had accompanied Egrin and Pagas in pursuit of the shattered nomads and had left Tylocost in command of the militia. The Juramonans, impressed by the elf’s skill and cool demeanor during the battle at the ruined town, had accepted him without question. The veteran members of the landed hordes opposed both the elf and the infantry, so in order to lessen the conflicts with the hordes, Tol had ordered that Tylocost bring the militia cross-country to a planned rendezvous. The two forces had agreed to meet where the eastern and western sources of the Caer came together to form the mighty river.