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When Tol awakened in the palace, Valaran revealed to him that she had been chosen to become one of the wives of Amaltar. Devastated by this news, Tol was then brought before the imperial court, where he was awarded the Order of the Silver Saber by Amaltar for his acts in service to the empire. Pakin III himself elevated Tol to one of the nobility and decreed that his name would be Lord Tolandruth. Tol was also made the personal champion of the Crown Prince and given command of the Daltigoth Horse Guard, the elite horsemen of the empire.
  

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When Tol awakened, Valaran revealed that she had been chosen to become one of the wives of Amaltar. Devastated, Tol was brought before the imperial court, where he was awarded the Order of the Silver Saber by Amaltar for his acts of service to the empire. Pakin III himself elevated Tol to the nobility and decreed that his name would be Lord Tolandruth.

  • When Tol awakened, Valaran revealed that she had been chosen to become one of the wives of Amaltar.
  • Devastated, Tol was brought before the imperial court, where he was awarded the Order of the Silver Saber by Amaltar for his acts of service to the empire.
  • Pakin III himself elevated Tol to the nobility and decreed that his name would be Lord Tolandruth.
  • Tol was also made the personal champion of the Crown Prince and given command of the Daltigoth Horse Guard, the elite horsemen of the empire.
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When Tol awakened, Valaran revealed that she had been chosen to become one of the wives of Amaltar. Devastated, Tol was brought before the imperial court, where he was awarded the Order of the Silver Saber by Amaltar for his acts of service to the empire. Pakin III himself elevated Tol to the nobility and decreed that his name would be Lord Tolandruth. Tol was also made the personal champion of

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