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We noticed that there were missing of two crystal arms in the chandelier and the four flower decorations are broken off. In addition, one of the arm was found to be twisted because it seems that someone tried to rejoin the broken arms, but the joint is not straight and it is bent.
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We noticed that two crystal arms of the chandelier were missing and the four flower decorations were broken off. In addition, one of the arms was found to be twisted because it seems that someone tried to rejoin the broken arm, but did not make it straight.
- We noticed that two crystal arms of the chandelier were missing and the four flower decorations were broken off.
- In addition, one of the arms was found to be twisted because it seems that someone tried to rejoin the broken arm, but did not make it straight.
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We noticed that two crystal arms of the chandelier were missing and the four flower decorations were broken off. In addition, one of the arms was found to be twisted because it seems that someone tried to rejoin the broken arm, but did not make it straight.
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