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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Are these sentence grammatically correct?

I am writing to request for the leave indemnity amount which needs to be calculated till December 2012. I am in a dire need of financial assistance to help pay for improvements to my property which is currently under mortgage.
  

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I am writing to request my leave indemnity calculated through December 2012. I am in dire need of financial assistance for improvements to my property, which is currently under mortgage.

— Mister Micawber

  • I am writing to request my leave indemnity calculated through December 2012.
  • I am in dire need of financial assistance for improvements to my property, which is currently under mortgage.
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I am writing to request my leave indemnity calculated through December 2012. I am in dire need of financial assistance for improvements to my property, which is currently under mortgage.
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Thank you very much for your kind help on this matter. Can I make the sentence as follows.
I have recently purchased a house in my home town taking a mortgage loan. Now I am in a dire need of financial assistance for improvements to my property, which is currently under mortgage.
Therefore, I would like to request you to issue my leave indemnity calculated through December 2012 at the earl
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Use what I gave you. The boss doesn't want to read all of that. Just add this at the bottom:

Thank you very much for your kind help.
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