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SHD Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing
Are these sentence grammatically correct?
At the outset, I would like to thank all the banking industry for prevailing us all the service and benefits.
As you are aware, I hold an account in your bank from last 10 years. On this occasion, let me focus to one of your service, which I am being experienced now, which badly blowed my altitude towards your bank and of course, which affected my transaction, towards many.
Since, I had requested for user ID and password for net-banking of your bank on [date] followed by so many reminders in last one year. But to vain, I had no response from your side regarding my ID and password. Obviously with a surprise it came to mind, this is happening in an industry, where service comes first.
You are now, requested again to look at this poor situation and ensure that this won’t happen to any, which creates an immense trouble, which is unexplainable
Look forward to your co-operation, which would be highly appreciated
As you are aware, I hold an account in your bank from last 10 years. On this occasion, let me focus to one of your service, which I am being experienced now, which badly blowed my altitude towards your bank and of course, which affected my transaction, towards many.
Since, I had requested for user ID and password for net-banking of your bank on [date] followed by so many reminders in last one year. But to vain, I had no response from your side regarding my ID and password. Obviously with a surprise it came to mind, this is happening in an industry, where service comes first.
You are now, requested again to look at this poor situation and ensure that this won’t happen to any, which creates an immense trouble, which is unexplainable
Look forward to your co-operation, which would be highly appreciated
Top answer
The tone is rather odd, SHD. You need to simplify and get to the point: Dear Manager, I have had an account at [bank name] for the l ast 10 years. I requested a user ID and password for net-banking on [date] followed by several reminders over the last months, but I have received no response at all.
- The tone is rather odd, SHD.
- You need to simplify and get to the point: Dear Manager, I have had an account at [bank name] for the l ast 10 years.
- I requested a user ID and password for net-banking on [date] followed by several reminders over the last months, but I have received no response at all.
- These days internet banking is necessary, and its unavailability is a major inconvenience.
- Please advise me on what the problem is.
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The tone is rather odd, SHD. You need to simplify and get to the point:
Dear Manager,
I have had an account at [bank name] for the last 10 years. I requested a user ID and password for net-banking on [date] followed by several reminders over the last months, but I have received no response at all.
These days internet
Dear Manager,
I have had an account at [bank name] for the last 10 years. I requested a user ID and password for net-banking on [date] followed by several reminders over the last months, but I have received no response at all.
These days internet
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