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Sometimes, the system doesn't respond properly when we upload the data and it will be automatically located under category various which is not really want to be. It is because of system failure to accept data on time.
All the items are re-categorized as per the list provided. The items reference from DF12 to DF25 were originally in the artwork category and these are now moved to category of soft goods as requested. These were kept in the artwork category because of its shape and characteristics.
  

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Here is how I would say it: Sometimes, the system doesn't respond properly when we upload the data. It automatically places them under various categories where we would not normally put them. This happens because of a system failure to accept data on time.

  • Here is how I would say it: Sometimes, the system doesn't respond properly when we upload the data.
  • It automatically places them under various categories where we would not normally put them.
  • This happens because of a system failure to accept data on time.
  • All the items have been re-categorized as per the list you provided.
  • Items DF12 to DF25 were originally in the artwork category; these have been moved to the category of soft goods as requested.
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Here is how I would say it:

Sometimes, the system doesn't respond properly when we upload the data. It automatically places them under various categories where we would not normally put them. This happens because of a system failure to accept data on time.
All the items have been re-categorized as per the list you provided. Items DF12 to DF25 were originally in the artwork category; t

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