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Yes, we noticed only one damge on 10th October 2011 because of poor light in the workshop. The next day morning, we checked all items delivered and noticed five more complaints - The paint on the vases were found to be damaged - like color faded, they tried to repair it, but patches are visible. It will be clearly noticed in the day time, not they are saying like it will be noticed only if we are going to observe from a 50 cm range. Even the poor workmanship, we tried to accept most of the items, but we can't accept this five vases due to poor finish. This guy is holding umberlla to cover his remarks.
  

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Yes, we noticed only one damaged item on October 10th because of poor lighting in the workshop. The next morning , we checked all items delivered and noticed five more complaints : the paint on the vases was damaged (the color had faded). They tried to repair it, but patches are still visible.

  • Yes, we noticed only one damaged item on October 10th because of poor lighting in the workshop.
  • The next morning , we checked all items delivered and noticed five more complaints : the paint on the vases was damaged (the color had faded).
  • They tried to repair it, but patches are still visible.
  • It will be clearly noticed in the daylight if observed from a 50-cm distance .
  • I n spite of the poor workmanship, we tried to accept most of the items, but we can't accept these five vases due to their poor finish.
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Yes, we noticed only one damaged item on October 10th because of poor lighting in the workshop. The next morning, we checked all items delivered and noticed five more complaints: the paint on the vases was damaged (the color had faded). They tried to repair it, but patches are still visible. It will be clearly noticed in the dayligh

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