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IMDJ Posted 15 years ago
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Please note that we received a call from one of our suppliers' driver on [date] and saying that they have one delivery for us and need to deliver to our stores. We have the same scenario occurred last month from other supplier. At that time we informed you that you should coordinate with us beforehand.
As you are aware, we are facing severe problems for storing the items in our warehouse because of lack space. So, we will not accept any items unless prior approval has been granted.
As you are aware, we are facing severe problems for storing the items in our warehouse because of lack space. So, we will not accept any items unless prior approval has been granted.
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These are run-on sentences. You should recast them and make them less long and wordy. Please note that we received a call from one of our suppliers' driver on [date] and saying that they have one delivery for us and need to deliver to our stores.
- These are run-on sentences.
- You should recast them and make them less long and wordy.
- Please note that we received a call from one of our suppliers' driver on [date] and saying that they have one delivery for us and need to deliver to our stores.
- We have the same scenario occurred last month from other supplier.
- At that time we informed you that you should coordinate with us beforehand.
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These are run-on sentences. You should recast them and make them less long and wordy.
Please note that we received a call from one of our suppliers' driver on [date] and saying that they have one delivery for us and need to deliver to our stores. We have the same scenario occurred last month from other supplier. At that time we informed you that you should coordinate with
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