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IMDJ Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Are these sentence correct?
As you are aware, the above cited item was delivered to the shop (shop name was given by the client) for repairing at the request of the client
After inspection, Shop person said that he couldn't repaired it as it was damaged beyond repairable then I reported Mr. X about this matter. He ask that we should inform the client officially.
After inspection, Shop person said that he couldn't repaired it as it was damaged beyond repairable then I reported Mr. X about this matter. He ask that we should inform the client officially.
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As you are aware, the above cited item was delivered to the shop ( the shop name was given by the client [It's not very clear why or in what circumstances the client did this, or why it's relevant]) for repair at the request of the client . After inspection, a shop person said that he couldn't repair it as it was too badly damaged. I then reported this matter to Mr.
- As you are aware, the above cited item was delivered to the shop ( the shop name was given by the client [It's not very clear why or in what circumstances the client did this, or why it's relevant]) for repair at the request of the client .
- After inspection, a shop person said that he couldn't repair it as it was too badly damaged.
- I then reported this matter to Mr.
- X .
- He asked that we should inform the client officially.
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As you are aware, the above cited item was delivered to the shop (the shop name was given by the client [It's not very clear why or in what circumstances the client did this, or why it's relevant]) for repair at the request of the client. After inspection, a shop person said that he couldn't repair it as it was too badly damaged. I then reporte
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Hey guys,
I am a little confused here.
Wordy, why did you cut "cited" and "should" from this paragraph?
- the above cited (or may be above-mentioned) item was delivered...
- the shop's name was ....
- he asked that we should inform ....
Thanks.
I am a little confused here.
Wordy, why did you cut "cited" and "should" from this paragraph?
- the above cited (or may be above-mentioned) item was delivered...
- the shop's name was ....
- he asked that we should inform ....
Thanks.
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dumbsejalWordy, why did you cut "cited" and "should" from this paragraph?If the word "cited" is retained then it should be hyphenated: "above-cited". That was my original correction, then I felt that, while not actually wrong, it looked out of place. "cited" is a word I associate more with references in academic works, not memos about repairs and deliv
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Thanks for the clarification Wordy. Some of the things mentioned over here are quite new for me.
Can we write the last sentence in the following ways, depending upon the situation?
- ... we should inform ...
- ... we must inform ...
- ... we have to inform ...
- ... we can inform ...
- ... we could inform ...
- ... we will inform ...
Can we write the last sentence in the following ways, depending upon the situation?
- ... we should inform ...
- ... we must inform ...
- ... we have to inform ...
- ... we can inform ...
- ... we could inform ...
- ... we will inform ...
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dumbsejal
Can we write the last sentence in the following ways, depending upon the situation?
- ... we should inform ...
- ... we must inform ...
- ... we have to inform ...
- ... we can inform ...
- ... we could inform ...
- ... we will inform ...
- ... we would inform ...
- ... we inform ...
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