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Please see the attached copy of my resume, it include my new address information.

Please see the attached copy of my resume with my new address information.

Please see the attached copy of my resume and my address information.

Note: The address is part of my resume heading, so I am kind of skeptical about the sentences.

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

Please see the attached copy of my resume, it include my new address information.

Please see the attached copy of my resume with my new address information.

Please see the attached copy of my resume and my address information.

Note: The address is part of my resume heading, so I am kind of skeptical about the sentences.

The situation seems to be this.

You applied for a job, and sent your resume.

Now you have a new address.

This is a bit tricky. I hope your email address and phone number have not changed.

If it were me, I would be more explicit. eg

I applied for the post of xxxxxxx on May 12, 2009. Please note that I now have a new address, as follows.

Best wishes, Clive

Anonymous · Answer

Thanks Clive.

Anonymous · Answer

How about this sentence?

Please see the attached copy of my resume; it includes my new address information.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

It's OK, but I like Clive's suggestion because it is clearer.
You can also write it like this:

Please see the attached copy of my resume which includes my new address information.

Cwtch · Answer

Clive
If it were me, I would be more explicit. eg

I applied for the post of xxxxxxx on May 12, 2009. Please note that I now have a new address, as follows.

good advice

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