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Please note that our technician went to the BCV site for installation of security system on 25/07/2011 but the client representative asked him to wait until client came to brief him so he had waited for another 30 minutes but no one has come. As he had schedule for another work, he couldn't wait for so long, so he went to the next site.
  

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Hi, Please note that our technician went to the BCV site for installation of security system on 25/07/2011 but the client representative asked him to wait until client came to brief him so he had waited for another 30 minutes but no one has come. As he had schedule for another work, he couldn't wait for so long, so he went to the next site. Please note that our technician went to the BCV site to install the security system on 25/07/2011.

  • Hi, Please note that our technician went to the BCV site for installation of security system on 25/07/2011 but the client representative asked him to wait until client came to brief him so he had waited for another 30 minutes but no one has come.
  • As he had schedule for another work, he couldn't wait for so long, so he went to the next site.
  • Please note that our technician went to the BCV site to install the security system on 25/07/2011.
  • However, the client representative asked him to wait until the client came to brief him.
  • He waited for another 30 minutes, but no-one came.
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Hi,

Please note that our technician went to the BCV site for installation of security system on 25/07/2011 but the client representative asked him to wait until client came to brief him so he had waited for another 30 minutes but no one has come. As he had schedule for another work, he couldn't wait for so long, so he went to the next site.

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