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Persian Learner Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Are these questions/sentences gramatically?

Hi...

Are these questions/sentences true grammatically?

1-John is very thirsty, people give him a whole glass of water.
2-John was very thirsty, people gave him a whole glass of water.
3-John is very thirsty,people are giving him a whole glass of water.
4-We will take a shower in Sunday.
5-England is far from Germany,we can't arrived there soon.
6-The sky is usually cloudy in the autumn.
7-sky is usually cloudy in autumn.

AND:

1-This cloudy sky shows that tonight is going to rain.
2-Which one is better? The green apple or the ripe apple?
3-We shouldn't pick green tomatoes.
4-We shouldn't pick the green tomatoes.
5-We Mustn't keep dogs at our homes.
6-We mustn't keep the dogs in our homes.
7-The police made us to go through this lane.
8-It's important that we climb that mountain very fast.
9-The weather is always snowy in Moscow and Saint Petersburg cities.

Thanks in advance
  

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Persian Learner Are these questions/sentences correct grammatically? I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to correct them and post your revised sentences here .

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  • Persian Learner Are these questions/sentences correct grammatically?
  • I have underlined some problem areas.
  • Please try to correct them and post your revised sentences here .
  • 1-John is very thir sty, p eople give him a whole glass of water.
  • 2-John was very thir sty, pe ople gave him a whole glass of water.
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Persian LearnerAre these questions/sentences correct grammatically?
I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to correct them and post your revised sentences here.

1-John is very thirsty, people give him a whole glass of water.
2-John was very thirsty, people gave him a whole glass of water.
3-John is very t
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Thank you indeed my dear teacher.

And now?


1-John is very thirsty therefore people give him a whole glass of water.
2-John was very thirsty therefore people gave him a whole glass of water.
3-John is very thirsty therefore people are giving him a whole glass of water.
4-We will take a shower on Sunday.
5-England is far from Germany so we can't arrive there so
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I think this one is better:
1-This cloudy sky shows that it is raining tonight.
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You still have punctuation problems. I have indicated in parentheses, in #1 only, the kind of corrections that I had expected:

1-John is very thirsty; therefore people give him a whole glass of water. (John is very thirsty, so people give him a whole glass of water OR John is very thirsty. People give him a whole glass of water). The sentence itself, howe
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Persian LearnerI think this one is better:1-This cloudy sky shows that it is raining tonight.
No, not so good. The present progressive for near future usually requires more solid, incontrovertible evidence (or a stronger plan).
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You are really perfect my dear teacher; thanks for your excellent answers.
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Another question that i've forgotten.

How can i use the word 'city' in this sentence?

"9-The weather is always snowy in Moscow and Saint Petersburg cities."

Can i use this one instead?

The weather is always snowy in the cities of Moscow and Saint Petersburg.
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Persian LearnerCan i use this one instead?The weather is always snowy in the cities of Moscow and Saint Petersburg.
Yes but it is completely unnecessary. If I were your editor, I would delete it.
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