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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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Please help to correct them if there are any incorrect. Thank you !

1. Our customer was required the full name and address for your materials supplier. Could you please provide us to them for it through their Mexico customs.
2. Our custom has been double checked the spare part last Friday, however, the were some parts shortage of ABC123, please replace them immediately and advice us the ready date by return
3. The shipment was released on December 05 and shipped yesterday
  

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Anonymous Please help to correct them if there are any incorrect. Thank you ! #1 - It's not clear to me who's supposed to get the information.

  • Anonymous Please help to correct them if there are any incorrect.
  • Thank you !
  • #1 - It's not clear to me who's supposed to get the information.
  • There seem to be five parties involved here: [1] your company, [2] your customer (seemingly in a different country), [3] the company or person you're sending this letter to (who, I guess, is providing the goods to you, or sending them through you), [4] the company or party who supplies the materials to your supplier, and [5] Mexico customs.
  • Through whose Mexico customs?
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AnonymousPlease help to correct them if there are any incorrect. Thank you !

#1 - It's not clear to me who's supposed to get the information. There seem to be five parties involved here: [1] your company, [2] your customer (seemingly in a different country), [3] the company or person you're sending this letter to (who, I guess, is providing the goods to you, o

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