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Natememart Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Are these lines grammatical correct?

Sorry for bothering you (I have been asking this question for the 3rd time alreadyEmotion: sad). This is my 1st time on this site. I just need some help with 2 lines from my poem. Are these lines grammatical correct?

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With this pen and this paper,

I keep them preserved here forever.

2)

But my body is in the nocturnal state,

Energized with brightness and curiosity.

Thank you! Emotion: smile
  

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I see no grammatical problem. The first couplet scans, but the second one doesn't. The idea of the second couplet is a bit elusive.

— Avangi

  • I see no grammatical problem.
  • The first couplet scans, but the second one doesn't.
  • The idea of the second couplet is a bit elusive.
  • Is yours the body of a night person?
  • Are brightness and curiosity the source of the energy or its effect?
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I see no grammatical problem.

The first couplet scans, but the second one doesn't.

The idea of the second couplet is a bit elusive. Is yours the body of a night person?

Are brightness and curiosity the source of the energy or its effect?

Thanks for joining us, nate. Welcome to English Forums! [<:o)]

Reminds me of #18 -
So long as men can bre
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